Shapeless, and dragging, no thanks, or hello
I follow behind you where ever you go
What is the purpose of being so close
when I am to you, just only a ghost.
I can't just sit by and watch you make your mistakes
I will not be pulled toward your dim lighted fate.
Cold, and, forgotten, you will sit all alone
with not even a shadow to call your own.
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I like the last stanza of this piece. Shadows are always lurking behind. Nice work
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Devestatingly painful. Striking and stricken and yet straightforward with a hard point. Fantastic write..
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lovely content. Could use some restructuring though. Less commas and turn this baby into short lines and I think you would be onto someone.
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that raised the hairs on my neck...
that final line is a killer...Cold and forgotten, you
will sit alone, with not even a shadow to call your
own.
way to write!
scared the hell out of me!
ears/Seattle way to write!
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ooooh cool as ^.^ very dark and malicious, spooky - well done!
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