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Diagnosis

Honeydew canvas

splotched with white and phlegm

 

Wrap around me, embellish me

 

Let my cancerous nature

 

F

A

L

L

 

from grace

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • nichtmich silver member
    April 24, 2008

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    Very original, I like the contrast between honeydew and the dark undertones of the rest of the poem. Best wishes!


  • Tattboyspet
    April 24, 2008

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    dark one here ... enjoyed the reference to the cancerous nature falling from grace.
    thank you for your entry