Do not believe her, she is only a snake,
her laugh, and her smiles are deceiving, and fake,
The theme of her dreams are of old portraits in green,
for this your heart she will rip at the seams,
Dry your eyes, and just realize that she is immune to your sobs, and your cries,
She will not protect you,
she doesn't know how, and requires the loyalty that she'll never vow,
This is merely a warning,
so do as you please,
I'm just trying to keep you from a fall to your knees...
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Wow, that was one strong feeling expressed here. It expresses a clear desire to stop someone from what you believe would be a tragic mistake. Not a conflict of interests I hope. Well done.
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The subject at hand is actually my sister
based on personal experiences of how she really is
so no, not conflict of interest simply 'fair warning'
thanks for your comment, much appreciated
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ouch!
this poem truly tears at the soul.
My goodness...fearlessly done, and for that you should
be commended for unleashing so powerfully!
you can't help but wonder what does this other person
think of you?
ears/Seattle way to unleash! whew!
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