Im giving in
This life is mine to create sin
Im giving up
This blood is mine to fill this cup
Im reliving my past
This anger is mine when serenity doesnt last
Im silently insane
With instability as my reason for vain
Im losing my soul
Amongst my lack of self-control
Im letting myself die
Because I definetely refuse to try
Forgetting all I fought for in the beginning
These drugs have my blood thinning
Im losing it all
Because I continue to fall
Im refusing to stand tall
When my faults are painted upon the wall
I am angry and I am lost
The line of identity has been crossed
I am tired of being alive
Living without a heart beat
I refuse to survive
In this continuous defeat
So say goodbye
And dont dare shead a tear
I would love to die
This is your worst fear
Just let me go
And you can live on in joy
But I need you to know
My hope you did destroy
That day you gave up
On being my mother
The day you gave up,
Was the day I did too.
A contest entry
- Looking for true inspiration by unanswered.
550 points, ended June 16, 2008, 38 entries
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Heart wrenching, yet beautiful.
"Im silently insane"
Oh how many times I've felt the same way.
Thank you and good luck in my contest. -
This is filled with raw emotion. I have been that girl once.
That day you gave up
On being my mother
The day you gave up,
Was the day I did too.
Perfect ending to a heart wrenching poem.
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
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aw.this made my heart sink. i'm not a fan of the rhyming(in anything) but you are very talented. thank you for entering!
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i dont usually write rhyming actually...if you want i can remove and enter a different peice suitable>??
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Oh hunny, this is so touching and very heartfelt, it almost made me cry, so painful and everything, just so heart braking here
I hope everything's okay...
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