I still see his face when he is gone
he makes me feel so right when I know its wrong
I cherish his love so very dear
and I cry right now, cause hes not here
I miss the smile he flashes at me
I miss the look in his eyes that I wish I could see
Ive never felt this way before
He's my better half, the side of me that I adore
He makes it shine, when its gloomy out
Gives me this feeling inside that makes me want to shout
He showed me the things I've always wanted to see
He opened my heart and brought out the best in me
Theres so many things that we've been through
but all this time he stayed by me strong and true
I love him dear with all my heart
Nothing anyone can do will take us apart
I am his and he is mine
I'll keep him forever till the end of time
Ill love him forever and hell love me
Forever we are meant to be.
A contest entry
- love poems {750 points for gold} by risewiththesmoke.
1000 points, ended April 23, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Have you ever loved someone so much, that they didnt even know it?
Comments
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Great, great,great!!!!!
I loved it!!
You r getting better and better, my favorite part was "Theres so many things that we've been through
but all this time he stayed by me strong and true
I love him dear with all my heart
Nothing anyone can do will take us apart"
I had tears in my eyes......WONDERFUL...
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i love this
thanks for entering
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