Here my voice
As I whisper your name
To think of you, I rejoice
My mind becomes tame
Laughter arises
A voice so raw
The call surprises
Emotions unthaw
A smile shall appear
Shivers crawl
Our friendship can never disappear
Sometimes tears shall fall
I trust you
With every secret
Your one of the few
That I will never regret
Good night
Sweet dreams
Turn off the light
Silent, happy screams
Head hits the pillow
Phone disconnects
A dream fallows
Our imaginations connect
A contest entry
- ~Sweet Dreams~ by Maybe Anastasia.
300 points, ended April 29, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
do you understand the concept...did you like it?
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OMG! I love it! It's amazing. It flows so well. Yes I get the concept and it's an awsome one. GREAT Write and thanks so much for the entry.
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oh thank you its my first gold
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wonderful
'shivers crawl...tears shall fall' i like those lines, and the sweet dreams.
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thank you...shivers do crawl when i talk to him
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This is a nice poem you and your friend most be rilly close. But it is a good poem.
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oh we are very close...i'v known him forever
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