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The Pegasus and Rider

I flew through the sky,
My spirits high,
I glanced at my rider,
We fly like a hunting spider.

I took to the ground,
And finally found,
A fiery crystal,
But was neally shot by a pistol.

They trudged through the mud,
Wanting blood,
They held up the pistol,
They said 'Give us the crystal.'

I leaped at the head,
The others fled,
But nocking me down,
Like a furious clown.

He was about to shoot,
But he got kicked by my riders boot,
We grabbed the crystal and leapt,
We did a Thessolian Roll and wept.

As you can guess,
Oh bless,
I am the last of the pegasi,
Like the stuff from Sci-Fi.

I am full of braveness,
But sometime feel lifeless,
Now I must fly,
With Col who thinks he's Popeye.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 26, 2008

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    Great sci-fi piece. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • DawnKestrel
    April 23, 2008

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    Amazing...
    See you in the finals!


  • XLadyXVengeanceX
    April 23, 2008

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    that was cute its very intersting if you ask me werid but very good keep it up please i would like to read more from you


  • MrCrepsley
    April 23, 2008
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    Cool

    Wow