I watched your hair fall upon your lips
and realized I would give anything
to be simple lock of your hair
and to your warm lips cling
I saw you glancing out the window
and I'm afraid I must confess
I wished I was a puff of cloud
that on me your eyes might rest.
I do not mean for this to sound like whining
I simply mean this: for you I'm pining
Author notes
I'm terrible at rhyming, but I hope you like this. I have an awful crush also, so I wrote this about her.
A contest entry
- My deepest Feelings of within by Abner.
600 points, ended May 5, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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tis a very sweet poem! hope you give it to her, I think she would like it.
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honestly this poem was sweet
the girl you like is going to be plesently suprised and get that gigidy feeling from this poem
great work
your ryming skills are fine
smile
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thanks for being the first.. and i would like to tell u that i love this poems so much and i hope i can get more like ones in this contest.. thanks very much
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