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spring

Sweet smell fragrance fills up in the air
Pretty spring flowers are everywhere
Refreshes everything by the rain
Is a beautiful renewal season
Nice, and the sun warms us up
Gets warmer by end of the spring

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  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    April 28, 2008

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    Poem is full of beautiful (and warm) images. Thought the use of scent and the word nice worked really well.


  • Sandygram
    April 24, 2008

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    Beautiful Poem

    Oh what a lovely poem you have penned about springtime. Your imagery describes spring perfectly. This was a pleasure to read this morning.

    Take care,
    Sandy


  • StarEyes
    April 23, 2008

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    WOW!!! Ok, you just really blew me away I did not even realize this was an acrostic till I was looking through the other comments.. That is good! Very Good!!! You ought to start entering contest hon, you are good!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Kelli Marie
    April 23, 2008

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    This is a sweet acrostic written about spring. I think you can omit smell in the first line since you have frangrance there, it is more poetic also.
    Kelli

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    April 23, 2008
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    Lovely spring write. I can feel and enjoy the freshness of Nature. Very nicely done.

    Lady D


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 23, 2008
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    Very nice acrostic for Spring. You summed the season up nicely. Very well done.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 23, 2008
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    Nice short write

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