Step by step
footprint breaking
pristine sands
as lapping waters
kiss gently
thoughts ebb and flow
bathed in summer’s hues
ideology of intelligence
remnants of hope
step by step
serenities solitude.
Author notes
Another awesome Jeannie D border creation.
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ok.. I want to be there! serenity is very missed when it comes to me... this was so great! you really took me there with you in this piece.. great write..
Angel
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My biggest problem here is that even without the picture I want to be there. Oh, for serenity, I don't know how to purchase it, but I can read it in your lines. This border thingy has become a parcel of your writing world and that's ok. RC
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Wonderful
Oh my another incredible border. And poem is marvelous. You do these so well. Thank you for sharing.
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Excellent write!!
So creative and calming! Love the message this brings to light. I can feel the emotion here. Imagery is fantastic! Don
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Mook,
You write the most incredible words that create their own life. You take us over and beyond the world in which we live. This is so beautiful. Again, you have honored me.
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nice alliteration ... good rythem too. I enjoyed the ebb-and-flow of the piece as well as that particular phrase. This gave off a feeling of calm. Very enjoyable.
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