Funny
By: rainbow bi trinity
Clock ticks laughter
Because sunshine
Has aroused
And the stars from
The night before
didn’t leave a note
Of jesters on
The door step.
I felt the heat
And heard the
Whispering of caged anger
As the rain
Wink at the skies,
Because its funny
That I rub the
Earth creatures
In the wrong way,
By staying
To myself
And not revealing
What makes me laugh
And cry your funny.
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Nice Job
I liked reading this, Wrot a follow up to it. I'll tell you where to find it next time we chat.
Hope you are well Baby. "BOO"
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Cool! The stars from the night before didn't leave a note. And, the heat whispering of caged anger. There is great, origonal expression here. You can capture things nicely.
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swirling centered
it certainly had an internal comical flash with surroundings
It reminds me how my husband seemed of a wadded up brain that expanded with speech, which my daughter thought weird... but it isn't so bizarre with checks. that's how yours seem from different element comparisons that sort of empty out, so another stanza.
the second stanza was more direct with reasons for raised eyebrows from directions.
it closes with a crack of a joke being as a poke, so we can get disoriented amusingly...
nice border for walked thoughts or to go out --
babies are my subject -
This flowed with a quick pace, and I really enjoyed you imaginative verse...
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Beautifully penned. Loved it.
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thanks
i was bored as hell when i wrote this
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Interesting write . Nice flow and Thanks for reading me.
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thanks for reading me as well take care
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Excellent !
I enjoyed this very captivating read indeed!
Thanks for sharing, and for reading me. Much love.
-Timothy
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thanks
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INTRESTING!!! I ENJOYED THIS NICE FLOW TOO IT
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nice write here i think ya did your thing trnity baby i on tha ^ love this just keep writing you will be good surely
Ya Boi D Finest
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