Sweet dreams,
Mi enamora,
Sweet dreams.
As you lay
Your head to sleep.
Think of me,
As you slip into
the land where
Dreams roam free.
For I will think of you,
And if you do the same,
Maybe we shall meet
In this land of
Careless naivety,
And join together
In the eternal dance
Of hopes and aspirations
That soar through the air
Like the petals of a
Newly-blossomed flower.
Sweet dreams,
Of me.
Author notes
When slipping between the worlds of dreams and reality, I have faith that in this world of tranquility, I can always be with those whom I love.
A contest entry
- ~Sweet Dreams~ by Maybe Anastasia.
300 points, ended April 29, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful. It was again a great write.
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Nicely done!
Sweet sentiments.
Write on!
*PEACE*
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very nice. It seemed to flow well and the wording is beutiful! Thanks very much for the entry.
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nice
Newly-blossomed flower.
Sweet dreams,
Of me.
you should have stopped there. the rest of it seems unnceccsary--almost to the point of losing what you had created in the first bit.
nice overall
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thanks for the help. i always appreciate advise from great poets. i re-read it and totally agree, so i have changed it. thanks for making my poem worth the time it took you to read it. lol. thanks.
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