Another day gone by
Another night stretched ahead
And I hope I have the strength to take it on
Without you here I am a nervous wreck
I need you here to take it on
Another daylight spent thinking of you
Another night ahead to dream
Maybe there will be peaceful sleep
But most likely a restlessness
Without you here I am a nervous wreck
I need you here to take on the night
I need you to take on the night
Author notes
I hope this is somewhat of what you are looking for...
A contest entry
- ~Sweet Dreams~ by Maybe Anastasia.
300 points, ended April 29, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It's very much what I was looking for. It's sweet. The flow is a little rough but I liked it. THanks for the entry.
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I like the repetition within this piece, it is like it is written as lyrics. Works very well.
Good write.
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