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Butterflies

Butterflies
graceful, colourful,
flutter, hover, fly.
In flight they delight.
Insects

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Modern Cinquain

The modern cinquain is based on a word count of words of a certain type.
line 1 - one word (noun) a title or name of the subject
line 2 - two words (adjectives) describing the title
line 3 - three words (verbs) describing an action related to the title
line 4 - four words describing a feeling about the title, a complete sentence
line 5 - one word referring back to the title of the poem

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  • Metaphorist
    April 23, 2008

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    Beautiful as well. Not sure about the last line. It satisfies the form but felt out of place. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Chrissy03
    April 23, 2008
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    lovely


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    April 23, 2008
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    butterfly poems always grab me, well done xx peter


  • Candy6
    April 23, 2008
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    It's lovely poem.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 23, 2008

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    this is truly beautiful i love the imagery that you have captured in the words and the life like symoblisim well done gran

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