No one has heard from you.
We all are getting worried.
The silence cuts through me like a knife.
Not knowing if you and her are alright.
You said to keep in touch.
But how can I.
When there is only the thought of losing you again on my mind.
You came back into my life to show me that a father you can be.
The reasons you say is because you love me.
If you do then why are you hiding from the world.
I want to know that my sister is just fine.
We all have been doing some thinking and it scares me to even think it.
That you could have done something to her in this state of mine.
Your pushing us all away again.
I feel I might not be able to trust you if this keeps up.
You won't be around for my graduation.
Or when I get deployed.
Please come back to being yourself.
I want to have you around.
Author notes
There's more to this. It was just what I was thinking about. Under a bunch of stress.
A contest entry
- Write what's on your heart. by broken-colours.
500 points, ended May 5, 2008, 24 entries
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it was awsome luved it
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this was awsome I luved it. this was really emotional I liked it alot luv ya sweetie
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STRENGTH
I wish you and your sister nothing but the best. However I know you a little and know your so strong. You have been one of my best friends on AP and have helped me so much, even a good laugh when I really need it. Its really funny cause I don't get along with females at all, I'm so lucky to have met you. Your write seem's like it is stressful but it is well written.
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Thanks a bunch. What can I say I am just one of a kind. I am glad that you see me as a best friend and that I helped you out.
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Ohhh, I hope things get better for you - and I hope everything turns out alright with your sister.
You know, this reminds me a lot of my brother - he is a paranoid schizophrenic. He doesn't call sometimes for weeks.. and when he does, he's always in a different character. I never know what to think when I talk to him. I never know what is reality or illision with him.
Well, I just wish the best for you... I'm a great ear if you ever need to talk
Best of luck in the contest!
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Definitely sounds stressful. You've expressed your feelings of anxiety and confusion rather well with this one. Simple, yet raw and descriptive. Thanks for entering our contest.
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