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The dreed.

Everyday I experience the dreed that is my life,
I try to be calm and I try to get as much peace as I can get.
I'm happy in one hand that things are looking up but on the
other hand there are people still trying to bring me down.
I'm finally getting on with my life and getting over
the sadness and the loss that was controlling me.

I try to be myself everyday but still people
close to me hate it and try to discourage me.
You are meant to be family but all you do is
put me down and make my life a nightmare,
I'm really getting on with my life but
little by little you remind me of the failure
that I am.

I'm meant to be happy at this time because
things are going well for me but this just
destroys me and then dreed comes to my reality.

I just want to be left alone in my corner
so I can be at peace and never have to worry
about you or other people that make my life a misery.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Kurt Black
    May 27, 2008

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    an opening chapter

    this kind of write is what im interested in.people can relate so well with this write, something like this could be a movie.its very good,keep spilling out all those powerful emotions on to paper,excellent write..aka kurt black


  • keith dark
    April 27, 2008
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    hey babe dont let people get you down, besides look at it this way people are always going to bring you down to their level but your a strong willed individual and a lot of people including myself enjoy hearing from you from time to time, so i say to you screw what others think because deep down they are all dead inside.