Bare footsteps meander in the golden sand
as the lovers walk connected hand in hand.
Storm clouds gather in the sky above,
but nothing will dampen their new found love.
The far off industry, mechanically unforgiving
although the two now know that life is for living.
Secrets told where no lies are heard,
upon the crest is spoken that special word.
A walk through the waves with ripples in their heart
Knowing together they’ll never be apart
A contest entry
- PIC inspired contest...Come & reserve your spot................ by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
500 points, ended May 2, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - all HM winners! by Cat10.
850 points, ended May 19, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thank you for entering! this is a very nice piece! great rhymes! you did a wonderful job! good luck in the contest!
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Awwwwwwwwww
Love this
Such love but also great life given to the picture...I didn't even need the pic to be there, was glad it wasn't lol
Rhyming and rhythm, beautiful and brilliantly done
Thank you and Good Luck
Cindy
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this is quiet beautiful. I really enjoyed the sincerety of the love you penned into your poem. I loved the line of secrets told where no lies are heard...this is important in real love. To have that safe place to tell and talk, and know you can trust one another...best to you in the contest~ blessings always~ Trisha
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