My Pet
Fiona was sitting in the reception with three other applicants. “One of us will be chosen for the position,” she thought to herself.
Just then a tall, dark haired gent walked by the reception, their eyes met and locked for a moment, she felt her cheeks begin to colour to crimson.
Jeff made a point of walking by the reception in order to catch a glimpse of his prospective candidates for the Personal Assistant position. The petite little red head had caught his attention as he strode past the waiting candidates. Once seated at his desk, he opened the drawer picking up a collar and fingering it. Smiling to himself he picked up the phone and dialled the extension for the reception. “Gail, please send the first lady in. Thank you.”
Fiona sat patiently waiting awaiting her turn to be shown through. The first and second interviews lasted a combined time of about fourteen minutes. Fiona was just wondering if this was a good or bad sign when she was informed that Mr Robertson was ready for her. She was shown into his office where she stood at the door feeling like a lost puppy.
“Please come in,” He said. Standing up He reached his hand across the antique oak table. “I’m Jeff Robertson, please take a seat,” he stated and motioned across the room to the settee’s in the alcove.
Fiona shook His hand and moved to where he motioned. Placed on the floor next to the settee she noticed two dog bowls, both empty, she wondered where the pet was. The interview, although short, she thought went very well. She left the offices and made her way home where she decided to take a long hot bath.
Lowering her slender body through the cold foam bubbles, the hot water below welcomed her. Laying back and relaxing in the water she let her thought drift back to Mr Jeff Robertson. Closing her eyes she ran her hands over her firm round breasts, squeezing her nipples making them erect. Sliding over her flat tummy to the soft curls below. Teasing her clit she imagined it was Mr Robertson’s tongue flicking at it.
Jeff sat at his desk fingering the collar once again, he wanted the little red head, but was not sure she was ready for this position. He did not really want to have to train anyone, but if that was what was to be, so be it. He picked up the phone and dialled Fiona’s number.
Fiona heard the phone ringing but decided to let the machine get it. She strolled to the bedroom with only a towel draped around her body. Pressing the button on the machine she heard the message, loud and clear.
“Ms Liebenberg, this is Mr Roberts. I have decided to offer you the position of my PA. Please make sure you report to the office and are seated at your desk at exactly eight am.”
Jeff made sure to be at the office earlier than usual he had to make sure that what he saw in Fiona was in fact real, and not just a figment of his imagination. He placed a small box on her desk with a note before entering his office and waiting to see her response.
Fiona was shown to her desk and sat down. There was a box and a note addressed to her. She opened the note it read, “I am waiting for you in my office.” Fiona was confused. She opened the box, it contained a collar and leash. There was a small disc attached to the collar, the name on it read Fiona.
A smile spread across her face. She immediately placed the collar around her neck, attached the leash to the D-ring. Holding the handle of the leash, she approached His office door and knocked.
“Enter.” Was all that was said.
she entered the office with the leash clenched between her teeth.
“Good girl,” Jeff whispered, “come.”
she dropped to her knees, head held high she crawled on all fours to where He was waiting for her. Taking her leash from her mouth He led her to the alcove, “on your cushion, and sit.”
she obeyed.
From the bowl on the floor, He took a pet chocolate and held it in His hand, “w a i t,” He commanded. “Ok you can take it now.”
she obeyed.
“This is how this relationship is going to work from now on. you will be at your desk by eight am. you will put your collar on, come in here and wait for me sitting on your cushion.” He explained, “do you understand?”
Fiona nodded her head that she did.
“All your duties will be performed from where you are now sitting, unless I tell you otherwise. I will not be in for the rest of the day, you may collect your uniform from the closet over there, and be back here tomorrow morning. One more thing Fiona, the collar is to be taken off and left on your desk in the evenings.” With that He stood up, petted her head and headed for the office door. “Oh you may have a drink of water if you are thirsty.” He said as he stepped over the threshold.
Fiona looked beside her where the two bowls were, one had nibbles in, the other water, she took a drink before making her way first to the closet to get her uniform then to the door.
Jeff left his office and entered the security office. He watched Fiona intently on the cctv security cameras, curious what she would do. He was very impressed when after having a sip of water she continued to walk on all fours to the closet remove the uniform and place the hanger in her mouth, then to the door, where she stood up, removed her collar and left it on the desk.
Fiona placed the collar back in the box on her desk, collected her handbag and left the office. her heart was beating wildly in her chest. How did He know she wondered. She was so turned on that she would hardly wait to strip out of her clothing and find her favourite vibrator. Climbing on her bed she remained on all fours, switched the vibe on and ran it over her clit, instantly bringing it to life. Slowly and teasingly she inserted it into herself, feeling how it stretched her to the max. her motions were slow and meticulous, wanting this to last as long as possible, knowing it could not. her need to climax was urgent.
Jeff waited a few minutes to make sure that she was not going to return to His office. He wanted to make this girl his and his alone. Sitting in the alcove His thoughts returned to her, the way her tits swayed as gravity teased them. The way her hips moved when she crawled. His hand automatically rubbing and teasing his cock over his trousers. Closing his eyes he imagined standing behind Fiona, grabbing her arse and thrusting his cock into her wetness. Squeezing His now very hard member, Jeff let out a groan. He would have to stop thinking about her. He wanted her in reality, not his imagination.
The following morning Fiona put on the uniform. It was a simple white shirt with a black skirt, the skirt was tight fitting over her arse and the length was a little longer than mid thigh. There was also instructions that she was to wear black stockings with suspenders and black stilettos.
Jeff was sitting at his desk when Fiona entered His office, on all fours. Wearing the collar and leash as instructed. she made her way to the cushion and awaited her instructions. Jeff continued to work and make calls, ignoring her, not because he didn’t want to look at her, but simply because she turned Him on so much. Finally when He could no longer resist her, He went over to where she was sitting took her leash and walked her to the centre of the office. Tugging her skirt till it was over her hips exposing her ass cheeks. He ran his hand over the peachy skin, pulling back he landed His palm with a solid thwack on each cheek. Fiona’s eyes twinkled.
Fiona was not quite sure what she was doing there, sitting quietly being ignored. Finally He walked over to her taking her leash and leading her to the centre of the office. she smiles to herself as he tugged and battled to get her skirt over her hips. she could feel herself getting wet as he touched her ass. she wanted him to take her, make her His. Thwack, He swatted her ass with his palm, Thwack it came down a second time. she almost climaxed.
Laughing out loud, Jeff caught a glimpse of the twinkle in her eye. Knowing that she would do His bidding He undid his zipper and asked, “where would my pet like this?”
Fiona looked up at Him with a glint in her big brown eyes, her mouth curled into a smile and she licked her lips. Edging forward she took Him into her mouth inching His erection down the back of her mouth and throat. Jeff groaned as she sucked Him in letting Him fill her mouth. Grabbing her hair He thrusts her head forcefully fucking her mouth.
Slowly He extracts Himself from her mouth and moves behind her. Taking a pair of scissors from His desk He cuts her underwear off.
Fiona’s hears stops as she feels the cold hardness of the scissors against the soft skin of her butt. she felt every fibre of her underwear being cut, letting out a slight whimper.
Kneeling behind her, Jeff places his hands on her butt cheeks and spreads them apart. His erection nestled in the warmth of her ass clevage.
Fiona wiggles back and forth, coaxing Him to enter her. Slowly He inserts the tip into her already wet cunt, pushing forward letting her body accept His manhood. His hand moves down and around to manipulate and play with her clit. Fiona drops her head and moans as He does this. Jeff smiles and pinches down on her clit. Fiona climaxes and melts into His warmth. Jeff’s motions increase as His climax nears, extracting Himself from her He pulls her hair bringing her face to His crotch once again. With her mouth willing and open she accepts Him. Running her tongue around His shaft swallowing Him as deep as she can. In one flowing motion Jeff thrusts Himself deep into her throat spurting His seed down her throat.
Fiona looks up at Him and smiles.
“There’s a good pet now,” He says to her. “Now come here I need you to type some correspondence for me.”
“Yes Mr Roertson,” she replies. Looking up at him she asks, “Mr Robertson, how did you know. About me, I mean?”
“It’s tell tale twinkle in your eyes my pet, its in your eyes.” He answers her and pets her head.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation: 17
A few grammar and spelling errors - you need to edit each piece before submitting it as this is needless points lost in such a wonderful story.
Presentation/Creativity: 19
I liked this. I liked the pet thing ... but then ...
How well you handled the challenge: 19
Excellent. You could have shared even more with the bowls and how wet that made her. Other than that, well well done.
Grab Me Effect: 20
Overall:19
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Total: 93
Well done hun. -
Awsome
Wow that was awsome that sounds like the kind of job that io would l;ike it waz so very well written i enjoyed the story so much
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You need to look at this with an editor's eye. there are several misspells and some grammar that needs correction before this becomes a fantastic piece. Please go back through this and tighten things up. Other than that, great story but it is missing more of the BDSM aspect of things.
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A well written story, containing all the essential elements. I loved the double POV played in this piece and with a little work it would run more smoothly I think, you gave us both sides of the story though well done. Spelling was out in places so some edit work there too. I suspect inspiration came from a famous BDSM movie, as it reads very closely to it. If this is the case it should be in your AN
Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation: 18
Presentation/Creativity: 18 a little too close to 'The Secretary'
How well you handled the challenge: 19
Grab Me Effect: 20
Overall:18
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Total: 93
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Spelling/grammar/punctuation = 17
There was a few spot were the spelling was off.
Presentation/creativity = 17
I found that there was a spot in which you repeated yourself...below you will see, two different paragraghs but they both say almost the same thing, which really lost me.
"He went over to where she was sitting took her leash and walked her to the centre of the office. Tugging her skirt till it was over her hips exposing her ass cheeks. He ran his hand over the peachy skin, pulling back he landed His palm with a solid thwack on each cheek. Fiona’s eyes twinkled.
Fiona was not quite sure what she was doing there, sitting quietly being ignored. Finally He walked over to her taking her leash and leading her to the centre of the office. she smiles to herself as he tugged and battled to get her skirt over her hips."
How well you handled the challenge = 20
I think this was perfect for what we asked for
'Grab me' effect = 17
I liked this story but I found myself a little bit confused after the repetition.
Overall = 17
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Total- 88
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Spelling/grammar/punctuation = 15
The grammar was just a tad off in this in a few places and there were one or two spelling errors. Also, your tenses were a bit off.
Presentation/creativity = 18
This write reminded me of a movie called 'The Secretary' which did take away from the flow for me a bit (was waiting to see the wetting on the floor
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How well you handled the challenge = 20
You know EXACTLY what a fetish is
'grab me' effect = 18
The vulgarity that was used put me off slightly, but despite that, you made my eyes glaze over and my mind start working overtime, so thank you for that!
Overall = 18
TOTAL = 89/100
This was a truly wonderful write and I enjoyed it thoroughly (lol! just as 'The Secretary' intrigued me so does this, so well done!
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Ok, I'm really into SMBD and damn, this got me so fuckin wet. I so wanted to be Mr Roertson. (I'm a domi) This was great and just what I needed.
~Nana Nicole


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