Perfect red toes aligned
mirrors admire sweet cherries
skin blossoms.
Author notes
SPRING - as a new pedicure (modern Haiku)
A contest entry
- April Snowstorm (Form poetry only) by trista.
1000 points, ended April 27, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your poem really does make me think of spring.
I loved the imagery and metaphors you've chosen, and though this has a couple more adjectives than I think are necessary in a 'Ku, there's not a single filler word to be found. Nice job, definitely one to make me smile and think of spring and summer sandal weather.
Thanks so much for your entry, and good luck in the contest!
Best wishes,
~J.
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Nice :)
Loved the metaphores with mirrors as eyes.......and your other grammatical choices are well chosen as well :)
A fun Ku' penned here....good luck to you and your entry!
God bless,
Bear ~
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Beautiful imagery here...All the best in the contest.
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