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you're my favourite little thing

I'll chump chump chump,
and you'll still be there.
Don't you cry honey bunny,
but I say 'Oh dear!'

Tomorrow I'll wake up,
before the cock crows,
I'll run back home,
Why, don't you let anybody know!

You're my favourite little thing,
I love your smell,
I love your taste,
you grow mold, but love you still.

Don't you know me?
Shh... don't tell,
smaller than a car,
bigger than an ant.
Now can you guess who I really am?
Lets continue the game,

You paint my name,
but I'm still crunchy,
in red, green, yellow and brown
Do you know me?

they also call me Mrs Granny Smith
and I'm almost fat-free

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Do you know me?

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  • individuality gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry which smiles with light, i just fancy a nice juicy apple now, sadly though i do not have any.


  • Silent-Myst
    April 25, 2008

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    Aw I like it. Is it an apple? lol
    It definately made me hungry haha. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks =)


    • Clarisz
      April 26, 2008
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      yea it's a green apple! thanks for kind comments =p


  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    April 23, 2008

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    This was fun to read! Has fun energy and images, like a children's book or maybe even break out into a song with it!