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That's all I can say.

God I don't know how to say
Thank You
I don't know how to say
I Love You
In a way that seems enough

But that's all I can say
and I hope You hear my heart
When I say
I thank You
I love You
I need You
and that's all

God I don't know how to live
for You
I don't know how to thirst
for You
In a way that seems enough

But that's all I can do
and i hope You see my heart
When I live for You
Thirst for You,
breathe You,
and that's all.

Author notes

another worship song.=)
God Bless,
crosseyed
Written December 12th, 2003

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  • Magnetic Stars
    January 24, 2004
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    Hey sis,
    Great song. I think this has to be one of my favorites of yours. Its comforting to know that when we have done all we can to show our love for God, he understands. He understands more deeply than we ever can. It's amazing to think about how he can see our heart and our motivation for what we do, instead of just seeing what we do. We can live for Christ and thirst for him, but that's all.
    I love this poem and it looks like I'm not the only one. Keep writing sis, and keep serving God.

    Matt


  • Saab
    December 21, 2003
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    Hey guess who needs to drop out of school and start writing worship songs??? Not you, because you need to finish school, but after you finish school, guess who needs to go start writing worship songs??? That's right! The Ashinator. Whoa, this is incredible. You're really good at this "poetry" thing This song means a lot to me, because I think the most frequently said phrase aside from "Please forgive me" I say to God is "I don't know how..." This totally showed all that. Great write, once again, Ash. great job and God bless!! -Saab

  • welbis
    December 15, 2003
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    fantastic :)

    awesome...this totally sounded like a song - i can almost hear it in my head- i love it

    thanks for sharing..this is one of my favourites of yours now

    take care gbu

  • Rek311
    December 14, 2003
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    I really liked this. I think many people feel like this and I have too. Have no doubt that he can hear you and see your heart. He can and he always takes care of his children. Good Job and keep it up.


  • BettyB
    December 14, 2003
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    Very Good

    Great writing and expressing yourself, God can see your heart and knows what you feel,but it is good that you can share it with others.

  • dIaMoNd dawl
    December 14, 2003
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    amen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a way to say what is the truth about every person! good write keep it up <

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