Blinding lights of cherished dreams
Glisten against the rippling water
Daring to test their boundaries
Discovering the beauty of dawn
Across the way thunder echoes
Shaking rain from the clouds
Flashes lighting up the sky
Wild winds forcing trees to bow
From daring days to peaceful nights
Magic whispers it exists
Within this miracle one shall find
That secrets hide within the mist
What speaks to you? What do you feel?
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beautiful!!! this i sone of my favorites by you.... i think because it of the fluidity with non-rhyming.. not that i don't like rhyme, but this is perfect with out it. the backdrop of nature is one of my favorites too... loved it all!
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nicely phrased
From daring days to peaceful nights
Magic whispers it exists... I like the image this invokes, it speaks from the heart... Well done & good luck in the contest 'd'(david)
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