Look at the sky my love
Look at the moon
The galaxies
Planets
Constellations
Do you realize, my darling
-Though we are miles apart we are united under the same stars, the same love.
Though the stars fade and fall, my love for you will stand forever-
No star can shine
Brighter than your smile
No blazing comet
Could capture
The beauty you possess
Never forget this, love
-Though we are miles apart, we are united under the same stars, the same love.
Though the stars fade and fall, my love for you will stand forever.-
Nature takes it's order
The stars slowly dim
Planets grow cold
Eventually dying out
Not so for us, darling
Our love will stand throughout time
-Though we are miles apart, we are united under the same stars, the same love.
Though the stars fade and fall, my love for you will stand forever.-
Author notes
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A contest entry
- All for All (im taking all poems and no rules =) )) by Erozay.
550 points, ended May 9, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Comment Number Six
Spendiferous. lol What? I don't know.
Anyway this is wonderful. I love love. except when it doesn't love me back.
Seems that you and this person is very close and well...not to state the obvious but... in love.
How wonderful. I mean amazing...or....darn it I used all my words in my dictionary. boo hooh hoo
NEW WORD: haha I can't think of one. lol -
its good
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I really liked the repeating lines under the three stanzas, beautiful, romantic, and true
. And the ending, describing how other things may fade and die, but that love survives
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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this is amazing and beautiful dedication of love you always do such a great job in your writing the words seem to just flow effortlessly for you nice work my dear
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