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dawn on the tundra

the sun rises
the mist parts
the blinding light
a silent symphony

a great and naked display

a challange...

a new day

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  • Babygurl209
    November 15
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    so true

    i so get wat u mean


  • Nikki Durant
    May 28, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Matt I like this. It makes me think of a beautiful new beginning of a life. Like waking up from a dark and deep coma only to see that the world still goes on and life can continue. There are so many things I could say about this, but really, it says everything. The title works well with the overall idea, and it just... flows. I enjoy your method of closing by return where the sun rises (line 1) and it is a new day (line 7). Wonderful and enlightening.