To raise daring thoughts on mental temple,
as well as few virtues over shouldering illusions,
tearing through a black sea of shadowy regions,
drawing for distant mysteries in blond epics.
Aurora filled in a magnetic cerebral filter,
roams for flora to play star galaxies,
in alluring twilight, as stored in vision,
in spaces to glitter, in few ecstasies pathetic.
Inhaling of mind sweetness in dazzles
of tears of silence in gloomy twilight,
wandering in search of primitive fantasies,
in high radiant skies of austere peace.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: 1. Raisins of the mind
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
525 points, ended April 23, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From April 2008 by amaranthine lover.
525 points, ended June 1, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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nicely done here
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.



