Serenity, mine.
This peace,
ascertaining it.
Such
A
Struggle.
Yet,
the bird
stayed with me.
Its Snowy-white giving, love, escorted me.
Together finding
this
tranquil place,
and today
serenity
is
mine.
Author notes
SO the picture inspired thoughts and feelings of hope and haivng faith that if you don't feel peace...theres someone, something guiding you back to it..
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Great take off the prompt darl....this whole piece just sighs serenity...good luck...
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Very serene it is!! I love what you did with the prompt hun... this is so lovely and uplifting!
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Aw Thanks SiS always appreciate ur comments
CIn
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There are moments like these when something takes our attention and we feel at peace in our surroundings. It does give me that kind of feel too. I don't think you need such a space between the first line, it gives too much of a pause to the piece. Other than that nice write. Love, C
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Thanks darl
The first line??
The first line up the top is the title..I put the poem lower to make sure its felt as the piece etc..
Cin
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Ok! I admit I had to go to the picture to see what this poem was about. Well! You did the prompt very well.
Love,
Amera♥
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lol. Thanks Darl
Cindy
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A very cool take on that photo, Cindy. For me, it fits very well but it is also unique and personal. You really seemed to make this one your own while keeping with the pic... very impressive. Good luck.
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Definetly wanted some uniqueness and something different structure wise..having the less words to work with, made it easier
Cin
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