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I am fire

                    I am born of fire
                    I come from ash
                    I am made of metal
                    With an unloved heart underneath
                    I am burning
                    always burning
                    Love me
                    understand me
                    I am helpless
                    I am born of fire


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  • oceanlove
    August 6, 2008
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    wow...

    whoah.. ths is awsome yo!!


  • Unconscious-Energy
    April 24, 2008
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    Well formed. Good luck.


  • KayJay
    April 23, 2008
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    Very nice take. I like your form and words. Well done.
    Ken


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 23, 2008
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    Nice write, good luck


  • nichtmich silver member
    April 23, 2008

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    I thought it was a Phoenix except for the metal part then I looked at the picture. A strange creature indeed! You described it well and gave it feelings. Good job!

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