There you are
Lying helplessly on the bathroom floor
Blood streaming from your nose
Dripping subtly down onto your luscious lips
And onto the gritty ceramic tile
A beautiful defiled masterpiece of blood
You’re purging yourself of all your insecurities
As you cling to your porcelain hell
I pity those who thought they were taking your innocence
With dollar bills in dimly lit alleys
Hunny, your pretty face doesn’t deserve another day
Author notes
"Broke; the pain between her thighs.
I see your pretty face, smashed against
the bathroom floor.
What a disgrace;
who do I feel sorry for?"
- 'Pretty' by Korn
A contest entry
- Quote Inspiration. by Puking Faerie Dust.
1200 points, ended May 19, 20 entries
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Comments
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This was a really good take on the prompt. it's actually about something totally different, but I'm glad to see that people use the prompts to how they see fit. The ending line was probably the best part, in my opinion. Very good and a tad bit shocking (though not much shocks me anymore
). I wish you would have gotten more into her past/life story, let us get to know her more. Thank you for entering, and good luck 
Jeanette*~ -
i liked it!!! keep up the good work
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