I sit alone
And look up at the darkened night sky.
The wind blows a soft tone,
I look at the stars and wonder why
People believe it was all made
By chance over millions of years.
It's incredible watching a star fade;
A star shine bright to calms my fears,
For I know that all that can I see
Was created by God and not by chance
From the insects, animals, skies and trees
He made it all from under the seas to the expanse.
Author notes
I do not believe in evolution, I believe in creation.
Stars are my inpsiration as I often gaze up at the night sky.
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faith is a powerful gift, the beginnings to another world, the world of wisdom and discernments, leading eventually to forgiveness and a true understanding of brotherly love. Peace.
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Beautiful!
Line 8: I think it should be "A star shines bright to calm my fears" or "A star shines bright and calms my fears".Otherwise, this was exquisite!
It is amazing how much faith you have, and how everything inspires you with that faith.
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Thank you for your comment and I always how some many little errors in my works and even ones that I wrote years ago I still find them when I read them.. thanks for letting me know, I really appreciate it. Some people say "Oh you have some spelling and/or grammatical errors and/or some of it doesn't flow/sound right" and then they don't poing them out, so thanks for doing it.
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