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[ i know you dont like it ]

i know you dont like it
but it makes me forget
it makes me forget all the pain you bring
it is what takes that pain away


the blood may scare you
but dont be afraid
its gonna just be a scar
you will understand someday
why i do the things i do

its sad to see you worry
but im me
and your you
we have different perspectives
on what we do

now let me be

and let me bleed

i dont care

i need it

just like i still need you

 

i have a question for you

why did you leave me?

i wont stop if you answer this

becuase your answer will hurt me the most





 

Author notes

its not really that good..i finished it..tell me what you think!!!i thinks its prudy good...not my best though..well i hope ya'll like it!!

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  • imakeurtearsfade
    April 23, 2008

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    i think it is good. but it could be stronger.. i think u should extend it more.. but an amazing start