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best friends forever

best friends forever..
thats what you told me...
im just sitting here writing this...
while your out with your homies....

what happen to us?
we used to be so close...
now it feels like we have drifted apart...
we dont want it to..but it already has....
im sorry to say but we are not living the past..
new things come and go...i get it..im gone..
well your siting here reading this..
thinking why did she leave....
well its what is best for you and me...
i will be back...
i can promise you that...
im sad to say goodbye for now..
mii best friend forever...

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its not the best

cricket
and im 12!!

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  • islekine gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    I need your username to give you some changes..

    while your s/b while you're out...meaning you are
    your homies is correct.
    Thanks...will delete this when you change...

  • islekine gold member
    April 24, 2008
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    I think this is a very heart felt poem.

    I do judge on grammar, spelling, punctuation...etc.
    Did you not capitalize "I" on purpose? it could be your style...let me know...Thanks for entering!
    Write on.
    *PEACE*


    • iah
      April 24, 2008
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      i never capitalize mii i's..lolz