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The Orphaned Children

The orphaned children
play with broken airplanes,
dented baseballs,
twisted jump ropes
entwined together,
with halves of used action figures
sorts of melted heads
broken ligaments
and a smile on their face.
The orphaned children
are rich

Author notes

Well, this is a poem I just wrote after reading a poem in English called "The Grocer's Children" by Herbert Scott. I really liked it and I just decided to play with the form of it.

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  • SmartBrick
    April 22, 2008

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    WOW!!!!!!! THIS ROCKSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz write some more like this!!!