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The Pond

Early in the morning
When light has sent the night away
But the sun has not climbed into sight
The pond sheds its cloud

The pond is as the human mind
Clearing before another day
The fog lifts
Wories and concerns gone away

The fog lifts off the pond
As it does the mind
But the day will stir the waters
Clouding thought once again

The pond will clear again
In the cool of the morning
And in the peace and tranquility
So can the mind

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  • Terri Norris silver member
    April 22, 2008
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    Nicely done my friend!
    I am not on very much anymore, so I was pleased to see your work today....I also did some writing today, some fun stuff...must be "words in the air"..lol!
    Hope this finds you well.
    The Piece above is excellent Art....
    Blessings,
    Terri.