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Spring

Spring has just begun,
the plants are blooming,
the buds are growing,
& the birds are chirping.
As the weather warms up,
my wardrobe changes too.

Sweaters into T-shirts,

pants into capris,

& boots into sandals.

From reflective white snow,

into bright and colourful plants,

spring is so wonderful,

except the beetles and ants.

 

 

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  • Nakatrea
    April 22, 2008

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    ahahahahahahahahahaha! i hate the bugs too. they are so bothersome. Oh well. i'm kinda liking this instant summer minus the humidity. and the mosquitoes. ewwww i hate mosquitoes !!!!!!!!!!!!!


    • shopaholica
      April 23, 2008
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      OMG me too!!!!! They're soo... ARGH
      not really, its gonna be colder soon =0
      because of the winds and stuff coming from the east or w/e