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You're at Fault

You've taken me for granted,

and I've escaped from your sight.

I'm just out of your reach,

but I'm backing further away.

 

Never want to hear your voice,

feel your touch, ever again.

Don't want to see you again,

and the next time'll be too soon.

 

Nothing you say can change my mind,

you already dug your own grave.

Flower, notes, and gifts won't work,

my feelings for you are all gone.

 

You treated me so bitterly and now,

you keep trying to apologize.

Why couldn't I just plainly see,

You weren't good enough for me.

 

Now, don't you regret it?

I'm not giving you a second chance.

Don't come crawling back to me,

because you dug your own grave.

 

Do you think that this would make better lyrics if I adjusted it than a poem?

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  • Nakatrea
    April 22, 2008

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    yes i do think these would make some good lyrics if you made some minor adjustments. maybe if it rhymed or if you made a chorus or something. it would be très coolio


    • shopaholica
      April 23, 2008
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      Really??
      But i am too lazy today to do so.
      OMG shiny and I made the board tournament i think