As I stepped into the swirl,
my mind got dizzy.
I was in a new world of color.
And then I saw it.
It was a rose!
It was my home!
I went inside,
and layed in my rose petal bed!
It was so soft!
Then I looked outside,
and saw I was on an island!
I saw everything!
This was my home,
and I loved it!
Author notes
I'll add more later.
and I read the rules!
A contest entry
- Awesome Pic Prompt!!!!:):):):) by The Green Elf.
523 points, ended April 29, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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i love it!!!!! Very creative and you better have read the rules
Nice write
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this is sweet
i thought it was great and i could really see it in my head(When you get to the 6th grade you'll understand that that is a VERY VERY good complement) Awesome poem! -
well, thats a happy poem. great job. I cant wait till you add more. and i'm glad you read the rules!!!!!!!1
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