Anticipation of
skin hunger satiated
with taste of naked flesh
salty sweet
skin upon skin
a tingling mingle
nerve ends strummed
with delicate tongue
hot breath breezes
fanning over cool sweat
the dip and curve
of you spread over me,
hot wet depths of you
warm life enclosing me
grasping firmly
in shared rhythm
building an exquisite agony
of release held back . . .
held back . . .
Racking stab of ecstasy
throbbing hot life that
drains us to collapse
we puddle together –
insensate, parched
wrapped together.
We doze
in fields
of dreams.
A contest entry
- The Knowledge Of Eve by Glasyalabolas.
800 points, ended May 12, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the rhythm of this piece, it goes very well with the subject matter, almost mirroring sex itself. Not only that, but the wording works very well in giving the reader very sumptuous images to play with in their mind.
Good write.
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WHOA!!! Hot hot HOT!
This was quite intense... in fact, I think I need a fan... or maybe a dip in a cool pool. Okay, just give me a mountain waterfall. LOL.
Very sexy, sensual, and well-written. The heat was literally radiating off the page.
You know, you write erotica very, very well. You should consider focusing on this genre a little more... we women sure wouldn't be complaining!!!
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Skin Hunger, no other words could be more suited for this! I think i need to open a window!
Beautiful and Erotic, gentle and devouring. Bravo!
"of you spread over me,
hot wet depths of you
warm life enclosing me
grasping firmly
in shared rhythm"
"we puddle together –
insensate, parched
wrapped together.
We doze
in fields
of dreams."
Exquisite Ending, Poet, Exquisite!!!
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To Doze into your beautiful words
Truly eceptional and broad in
that which fills chambers, to undo
emotions awaiting freedom.
Truly a masterpiece, crafted
from a soul that feels to the core.
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