Tears fall
light fades to dark
as stars shine like diamonds
in a sky of twilight velvet
and the soft wind gently calls out your name
Haunting my mind with days long past
reopening old wounds
to bleed like rain
Tears fall
Author notes
Grammy Awards for HM winners
* Another dark and lonely night
In a list
- 4. Honorable Mentions • next in list
- 3. Bronze List • next in list
- Loss , Dispair & Darkness • next in list
A contest entry
- Unrhymed Form Poetry by Metaphorist.
600 points, ended April 23, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Grammy Awards for HM winners by Rebekah-Ann.
450 points, ended May 2, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Damn, this rictameter was flawless and full of feeling why it only received HM is beyond me. Well penned poet.
Maybe in the next one they will see this as a top three winner.
Love,
Passions
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I loved this poem. the color shceme, the Rhyme and the meaning. It's a perfect fit the the prompt. thank you for your lovely entry!
All the best!
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Thank you for the gracious comment. ~Bret~
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Perfect. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Thanks Much, and thank you for the recognition ~Bret~
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Excellent Work. I loved it.
This is a sad poem, but I loved it. Keep your head up, and keep writing. -
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I am glad you enjoyed it, thank you much for your comment ~Bret~
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Your Welcome
You can check out my poem under new poems. It's called "Religion"
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Good
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