Pain and suffering,
the evil one.
Who you used to care about,
screwed you over too many times
They broke your heart,
ruined your life
Messed up everything,
that was important to you.
Now you have no love left for that person
Who has made you who you are today.
They don’t care anymore and you will
Always Hate them
Author notes
promt: 4 letter words "hate"
A contest entry
- JUST TWO DAYS TO REACH 1000 ENTRIES !!!! ( BE A PART OF THIS RECORD BREAKING CONTEST ) by Alex Hex.
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Comments
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"Who you used to care about, screwed you over too many times" that was my favorite part the whole poem was very well written with emotion. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck ..<3.. Shelly
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Great words in this its very well written short but you made a point . LOVERS IT.Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
Shelly -
hate a strong and well deserved word... good job
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yup. I know how that feels. there was this guy who would put me down every day and he still tries to talk to me but i hate him so much. he did that while i was dating him. great poem, its so real. it has so much emotion and i totally believe that you hate him and that you are in pain. you are really good at putting just enough detail in your poetry and not too much or too little. great job
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