I cant take my mind off of you
my eyes wide open
as tired as i am
i replay the day i spent with you
A broken record of time
I see you everyday
its so hard for me
sitting in class
trying to do my work
i am distracted by your image in my mind
The rumors and the lies
are confusing me about how you feel
i cant think
i dont know what to say
i just wish you could tell me upfront
I always have liked you
But im worried it will ruin
what we already have
is it better this way
or shall we go to the next step?
I wish i could come up to you
and ask you straight
so i can finally get you off my mind
So i can think clearly
i am spinning out of control
i wrote this one in literally 7 minutes..what do you think?
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Sometimes it is ok to have someone stuck in your mind... I have one stuck in my mind, in my heart that has been there for a while now, and is gonna be there for quite a while longer I think.
No this is not bad.. I kinda enjoyed the simplicity of it. That is a Good thing!!
and love
Nyetta
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Ya know Sam, if you can't get a person out of your mind. Just maybe they're supposed to be there. *smiles*
This is a good poem. I can see a few ways to improv it and make it even better, but I've been writing for years. I also find ways to improv others poems. *laughs*
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Hmm
Well Its Not Bad Its better then other ones a lot better but im just wondering is it Lloyd or Sean or Shon J?
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lol thanks
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