Sometimes I just wanna bash her head in
but most people can’t rationalize this,
and if I write a poem about it,
post it on the internet
you’re gonna get nothing but
negative feed back guarantee.
People aren’t gonna see the poem there.
They’re just gonna zero in on the
head bashing statement.
You can’t justify violence
no matter what these days,
or driving a gas guzzler.
Something I’m gonna have to learn to live with I guess,
along with her purple hair, tattoos, and body piercings.
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"ForeverLastingComa"
A contest entry
- I'm in the mood for ANYTHING! by ForeverLastingComa.
550 points, ended April 25, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow..thats kinda crazy..so why do you want to bash ur kids head again lolz =p jus playing: purple hair, tattoos, and body piercings.
i guess you have a reaon to want to..BUT DONT!! MAKE LOVE NOT WAR! =p..good luck with your kid and this contest =) -
I love that last line, it redeems the whole poem for me after the startling opening. I now understand why you want to bash her head in. Lol.
Bill
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