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Ocean

Ocean
cold, vast
churning, rolling, raging
your depths seem unending
Timeless

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Modern Cinquain

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  • Metaphorist
    April 23, 2008

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    Beautiful. I don't know if "timeless" is the best choice as far as the form is concerned. It doesn't relate to the word "ocean" so much. In any case, thanks for entering and good luck!