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Winter to spring

Cold and harsh it can be
White things fluttering in the air
As far as the eye can see is white

Trees are bare (except for evergreens)
Not a flower in sight
Jackets thick and the roads are salted

The spell of winter has arrived
Your wishing it was spring
Only a couple weeks to go

A couple weeks later now it is green
Trees getting back their color
Shorts and T-shirts everywhere

Not a jacket in sight
Spring has cast it's spell once again
Flowers are popping up everywhere

You are as happy as could be
The warm sun filling up the sky
The water ever so warm

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  • iamlost gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    I love the emotions in this, and the beautiful idea of turning winter to spring. Your winter descriptions are beautiful, and I love how light and carefree spring becomes. Wonderful.


  • Hihamburger
    April 23, 2008
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    Thank you for your support kiwi.

    • Hihamburger
      April 23, 2008
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      kira thank you for being so supportive but i didn't win anything.


  • kira1115
    April 22, 2008
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    Very good poem Hammy. Good luck in your contest!