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Blue Bird

 

 

 

 

 

 

Creased blue tuxedo

Fluttering around my yard

in search of food

 

 

 

 

 




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  • mizclaws
    May 10, 2008
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    nice

    very nice


  • crimsondew
    May 4, 2008

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    this is very pretty..you are good with haikus

    trying a tanka for this one---
    Brightening my day with chirps
    as all I can do is smile.


  • azure85 gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    Creased blue tuxedo
    Fluttering around my yard
    in search of food

    A very pretty picture of a spring day, thank you so much!


  • penman gold member
    April 30, 2008
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    Wonderful

    What a great haiku. Such great descriptions. Best of luck in the contest.


  • apbluefairy
    April 30, 2008
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    It makes me smile.


  • KayJay
    April 22, 2008
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    Very nicely done... Bravo!
    Ken

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