Well, I can see it now
my brand new outfit
cute new top
and my tight 'hot pants'
Shorts in purple
my top in white
I dazzled and danced
in fluorescent light
But little did I know
and little did I see
why everyone there
was looking at me
My two friends
sidled up by my side
and ushered me out
with my hot pants
for a ride
Home I was going
there was nothing else to do
as the rip in my pants
wasn't to be fixed with any glue
Mortified at the thought
at my lovely 'hot pants'
that I'd bought
ripping at the seams
for everyone to glean
in fluorescent flickers
I'd revealed my bright white ......
written by Libithina (c)
Author notes
Happy days!!
A contest entry
- One Funny-Bizzare Event Flaired by 2lullabyhaven.
500 points, ended May 6, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lol. I've had similar moments in my life. They are beyond embarrassing at the time. And sometimes even when I look back upon them I still get embarrassed. This is a great write. Very nicely written.
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ah perhaps next time it would be wise to get some baggy shorts lol room to move and breathe, a good fun poem.
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Heehee I think so too !!
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Oh my goodness
So embarasing
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knickers! Haha! What a cute and funny story! Thanks for sharing - always up for a good laugh!
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So Funny!
lol this is so funny. It reminded me of the time I had just bought this new skirt it was not very short it was blue jeans fabric. Anyways my husband Jason and I were going to the bank and as I was walking in front of him he said are you enjoying the breeze as he laughed. It then dawned on me that yes there was a breeze and it was coming from my backside. My skirt had split right by the seam about 12 inches long and yes my undies were showing. I was so embarrassed Jason got my jacket from the car and I tied it around my rip so that we could finish our errands. It is funny now but when it happened I was red as a beet lol. Thanks for sharing this morning and for the laugh. Have a wonderful day my friend
love Theresa
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HAHAHAHAHHAHA
HAHAHAHAHAHA
THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO MUCH
WELL DONE LIBBY
GREAT IMAGERY THERE!!
HAHAHA
xx
Wayne Leon
Good Luck in the competition. x
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soooo glad you enjoyed this Wayne and it made you smile I can still see it now *cringe* hehehe Lib x
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Oh gosh, this has brought back memories; all those vivid white shirts and teeth!! Great poem, well written. Good luck Lib
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MMmmm and you couldn't wear anything black because it showed up every speck love Lib x x
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Oh my hahaha that's a 'sordid' affair hahaha thanks for your entry into my contest
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hehehe Sooo glad you enjoyed it lullaby Love Lib x x
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LOL!! What a wonderful story!!! This is one to tell your grandkids about. I haven't heard the term "hot pants" since I was a teenager!!! I loved this!
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hahaha... A jiggling I never forgotten ..and thought I would pen it down before I did lol...happy days, the swinging sixties..mini skirts..and platform shoes...ahh, such happy days Love Lib x x
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