I can breathe again.
In the absence of you there is the constant cadence
that is oxygen to my blood.
I forget to suffocate
when he holds me.
My heart beat slows
in the build of broad shoulders.
But…
His hands are harsh even in his gentlest moments,
and he moves with agonizing pace even as I beg for motionlessness.
And it’s not him.
It’s me.
And it’s not you…
It’s me.
You linger on my lips and in my heart.
And I long for breathlessness once again.
Please Tell Me What You Think
Comments
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Wow... This write was breathtaking! You have a style that really reminds me of how Roo writes... Or maybe she writes based off of your style, I dunno.
But this was beautiful, yet sad, and full of emotion!
~Cassie
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i like this...its good, raw with emotion
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WOW!! What a read this one is! You know, I long for that feeling too... Thought I had it at one time, but, found out I was wrong, and well will never have it the way I long for... But this is great!!! I wish you all the luck..
and love
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I've been staring at this for what must be at least two solid minutes. That doesn't sound like a lot, but when you've got a thousand andone thoughts swirling around your mind, it's forever.
I don't know what to say.
I long for breathlessness myself again too...
I'll return when I find decent words
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