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Thoughts

Look at what you wanted to be
They tried to show you but you couldn't see
What a mess you've made of it all
You fell, and still tried to stand tall
You think you can but they watch you crawl
You can't see how far you'll fall

So now it's all catching up to you
You lie there at night what the hell are you going to do
Thinking it over, wishing you could start again
But it's to late for that so let those thoughts drive you insane
Searching for yourself
And all you can find is someone else

So what happened to you before everything changed
Let slip your priorities, your life was rearranged
All that awaits you is fear
But wait, hold back that tear
It's not for you to cry, for you have placed yourself here
Sit back in that driving seat and decide which direction you want to steer.

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  • faded angel
    June 27, 2008

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    dude i remember u tellin me u had written a new one n i hadnt seen it yet....tis a very clever piece without tryin to be confusing. 'hold back that tear, it's not for you to cry, for you have placed yourself here'...i really like that bit as its kinda.....whats the word *thinks bout it* ahhh damn it, i cant think of the word but i no wot i mean lol....AWESOME

    keep written em n lettin me read em speak soon xx