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running

Captured by sanity
I ask for something more
Loathing in my vanity
I cry like once before

Only this to myself
I do because I’m sad
The worst one off the shelf
I only hope I’m not that bad

But how can I deny
The truth that runs so deep
These times I always cry
I just wish that I could sleep

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  • Cat10
    April 22, 2008

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    I like it! like most of your other stuff lol, yay I'm the first to comment this one! really, a great job though