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continue walking

Passing through the halls
I hear a normal sound
Familiar to me
And all around

I only ask to listen
To the words that others say
The words I hope will heal me
And take this pain away

I have found the reasons for doing
That which I do best
So that I’ll continue doing
And forget about the rest

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  • Cat10
    April 22, 2008
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    good job, again!