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Twenty Nine Candles

I’m sending you this birthday wish
stars of heaven on silver dish
a big white cake and ice cream too
twenty nine candles for you to subdue
~Happy Birthday~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 26, 2008
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    I love how you use her name as an image in this poem.


  • Arizona Sunset
    April 22, 2008
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    beautiful ...oh my what a stunning background


  • Stickboy gold member
    April 22, 2008
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    awwwwwwwww this was sweet

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    Oh this is very nice and I love the background thank you very much for this beautiful wish have a wonderful day